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SuicideSuicide What is going on? Why is this happening to me? I feel locked up, Nobody will let me free. I cry myself to sleep, Hoping for the strength to go on, But nobody cares. They will... when I'm gone. You said,I don't feel with you like I was before I knew I had nothing new to offer I just have my life and I give you that I promise then u'll understand Why I took my life today I try to patch the wounds That are in my heart so deep No one tried to help me When I was feeling down They just went on with their lives As if I wasn't around If only one person Had something nice to say Maybe I would be here Alive this very day But maybe if someone loved me Or showed me that they cared Maybe I would be here Now they'll shed a tear." Sincerely, The one not treated fairly Everyone will see this, I will tie it to my arm, So when I'm there sleeping with pills, No one can give me any more harm. And all this could've been stopped, If someone put a smile on my face, But because no one cared, I'm in a different place. Lubaina. Comments: Comment By: Ivy on July 21, 2005 01:16:00 AM WOW!! this poem is really well written it is scary but i like it ivy Comment By: FrozenTears on July 20, 2005 09:57:57 AM Wow lubs this is sad and scary, im hoping this was a message for the world to stop and listen and not one of self reflections.. If every you need a friend im just and im away Tears Comment By: Poetic Soldier on July 20, 2005 09:13:26 AM Sad poem my friend if you are ever feeling like taking a jump of the bridge of despair let me know and I'll make sure i'm at the bottom with a crash mat. Nathaniel Comment By: Edward kent on July 5, 2005 12:38:30 PM powerful stuff Lubs I hope it was fiction. you know we all luvs lubs . Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on May 30, 2005 11:33:57 AM I hope you are not writing about yourself Lubs. You capture the inner agony of abandonment the depressed feel when the world has stopped turning for them...but for others it just keeps going. Good work but I hope it is not about you. Alison SW who cares. Poetry Ad-Free Upgrades Vote for this poem
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