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AN INVITATION
I've put my poems on the Web
I hope that you have read
I'm waiting for your feedback
I must say, this I dread.
Well to be honest I've had some
Which was good and none too bad
And it helped me to keep going
When I was feeling sad.
So I've tried to do some critique
Which is genuine and sincere
As I know it makes a difference
And it brings a lot of cheer.
So now please pay a visit
Read my poems and I am sure
You will get some inspiration
That will help you write some more.
When you've read my contribution
And you feel it's not too bad
Just click on the “send critique”
And I'm sure that I'll be glad.
Julie Aug 2000 © All rights reserved
poetrypoem.com/shelley
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