John's poems of...LIFE - LIVING &LOVE...JDJ

critique

before i would critique someone negative or bad: i would think twice,do i want to make someone happy or sad:       for me if i didnt have something good or positive to say, id rather not say nothing at all: how do i know if my words negative or bad, may bring another to fall:       i think we cannot underestimate the great,depth and power of a word: either written or heard:       "tact" is a leadership trait that we should all heed: to critique someone to put them down and low,is for your own self worth and greed:       words carry the power to motivate and inspire: gentle words can calm and soothe,harsh words can start a fire:       i think the good we must see in all: better to find the positive and build someone up,rather to be negative and watch them fall:       with critique the words we choose to use: will cause a person to win or loose:       critique we should be able to take it lightly and not so deep at heart: but still negative or bad critique pierce you like a dart:       THE MESSAGE OF THIS POEM IS PLAIN: GIVE WARMTH AND LOVE AND SUNSHINE,BEFORE A STORM OF RAIN:       JDJ 09-12-2005

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