My heart was closed to the world,
a door that would not open,
a wall that would not fall.
All because of my past experience
My heart was broken, split in two.
Never, I thought, could it be mended,
until that faithful day that I met you!
You smashed the wall, broke down the door,
and picked up the pieces of my heart.
You showed me what love could be,
and for this I am greatful
which is why I Love You So,
with all my heart, mind, body, and soul.
Comment By: Richard Michael Cronin on August 31, 2006 05:09:05 PM Report
Yes love can put a new prospective on ones outlook on life. Excellent write here.
And I enjoyed the synopsis on love on your page, very wise!
Comment By: Roger Bacon on August 31, 2006 03:46:04 PM Report
I think love has two sides, and even with the bad side we need it to appreciate the good side. That is what I read into your well written poem.
Comment By: Hannah Louise on August 31, 2006 12:19:25 PM Report
A beautiful write :]]
Well done.
~Hannah
x
Comment By: Adri on August 31, 2006 05:32:41 AM Report
This is a beautiful testament of love... We all feel and promise ourselves we will never love again, once are heart is broken, but luckily, someone always comes along, and break down the wall. Lovely poem and I wish you all the happiness!
Adri x
Comment By: lionheart on August 7, 2006 06:53:54 AM Report
Time is a healer and fate is a provider. It is a combination of these things that has helped make you happy again.
