Good-bye were words we promised not to say
even if we had a couple of fights and things didn't go our way
now tell me when our journey on our road came to an end
you won't even talk---- even as friends
how could you give up all that we had
you just called me on the phone and said that you wanted to leave
my heart felt like it just stopped and I found it hard to breathe
how could you do it to me
I thought I was the one you need
Honey did you creep around on some nights
did she comfort you at her house when we had fights
I did everything
and you just let me go as if the summer was a fling
I swear i never did nothing to hurt you
I can't understand why you say we are through
do you think of only me when you hold me close
or are you thinking where you want to touch her the most
and through this all do you still love me?
or is this where the dream ends and reality begins?
Comment By: Mujtaba H Zaidi on July 29, 2006 06:10:45 AM Report
Beautiful and carefully arranged spell of magical words!
Comment By: Joe Petro on June 4, 2006 03:29:31 AM Report
This is a heartbreaker, but it's said , without the heartbreak to contrast we may not know the heights of joy. And joy will cycle aroung again. Well written piece. jp
Comment By: ....'Nick'.... on May 31, 2006 09:23:04 AM Report
Tear jerker for me...loved it.
All the best,
~Nick
Comment By: FrozenTears on May 31, 2006 07:50:53 AM Report
very heart breaken words lubs,
Sometimes we just don;t see it coming,
big hugz your way love and Light
Tearz
