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Feeling Foolish




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Feeling Foolish

I feel pretty silly right now...kinda like duh you know?

Had no feedback for days...didn't figure,where did it go?

Just STOPPED...all at once like I had no poems here anywhere,

Looked for days to see if any new...found nothing to share.

Then I went to the feedback club...and gave feedback,
quite a few in all,

Really pretty poems,you all are great...at least the
ones I saw.

And it Still didn't list my name...I thought well this
isn't right,

So I went back to my site...I realized I may Not be too
bright.

I really hate admitting that about myself...but I'm afraid
it may be true,

Somehow or another I had hit the critique and disabled all feedback,

I mean you would think I would have noticed before...how sad
is that?

So...if you ever think no one is reading your great poems
you put so much effort in,

Check that little button first...now that you know how foolish I've been.


Pamela Jayne Hahn

February 20 2004










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