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Constructive Criticism



I didn't adore you when you sat there
Cracking wise at me for making a mistake.
I didn't adore you at all
For making me know the taste of self loathing.
I could never learn to love you now
For you have infected my mouth with antagonism.
What once was someone decent,
You turned her into a freak of nature,
Someone fearing even her own shadow,
But you could care less.
As long as you have all your things,
Life is good for you but the rest of us must suffer.
I never appreciated you until you were gone,
Your infuriating constructive criticism,
I truly missed.

March 11, 2004
Suge







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