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You are boring.
You use too many cliche's.
You write drivel,
unimaginative and prosey,
going on and on and on,
too many poems about love
and loss and flight of ideas.

You use hyperbole and
write Hallmark Harlequin
CRAP!!!!
You are unoriginal and
some of your poems read
like really bad journal entries.

That's what my editor says.

So I had to X her out
with a red grease pencil,
run through her center
with pointed scissors
and flush her down the toilet
leaving her to the
sewer alligators.

It's good to be free
to write bad poetry again.
It's all good.

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