Your beautiful feedback is one of the reasons I write so I like to share it~to say thank you for letting me reach into your life and touch your soul~with laughter tears, or simply a sense of recognition! Thank you for reading me!
I Am Rating: Excellent
This one is nice - I like it. - Six
I Am Rating: Good
Wonderful Lori, -smiles- Great job, well expressed, and very unique! Keep these coming, I enjoyed this read muchly! -hugs- -
Reflections of Beauty Rating: Excellent
YOUR PICTURE REMINDS ME SO MUCH OF THE GIRLS THAT ADOPTED ME FOR THEIR DAD. THEY WERE ALL SEXUALLY ABUSED BY THEIR OWN BLOOD FATHERS AND WANTED ONE WHO WOULD ONLY LOVE THEM AS ATRUE FATHER SHOULD. I DO. IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO READ SOME OF MINE GO TO POETRYPOEM.COM AND LOOK UP LOTSAWORDS. YOURS IS TRUE BEAUTY THAT COMES FROM DEEP WITHIN YOUR SOUL.
Always Remember / Never Forget Rating: Excellent
good..read me
Through Your Eyes Rating: Excellent
Such beautiful face, damn girl you are good, I mean really good,
Always Remember / Never Forget Rating: Excellent
You are very deep, and your poetry seems to grasp every emotions which fades through the mind and heart. This piece was written so beautifully, with ease and thoughts of life in romance of peace and memories. Good job.
Go Fish AKA Call Girl Rating: Excellent
u are good and i like that which i have read...wish God more improvement and love for ur works to grow higher....wish to be in inyernational poetry too and better higher than any one could think...
The Queen Who Wouldn't Give Him A Ship Rating:
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
The Queen Who Wouldn't Give Him A Ship Rating: Excellent
wow, that is excellent Lori ! :-)
Asking For Help Rating: Excellent
Lori This poem was very touching and filled with emotions , I am alone almost all the time I have my dogs but it just isn't the same. I find myself in a world where I write and listen to music alot,at times the emptiness is unbearable. But I strive to do my best knowing God is looking over me and his angles comfort me with my emotions with there feathered wings I never see them but they are always there. so I continue to paint and write my poetry and listen to music, and play with the dogs to get through the day.so I can relate to your words and your emotions and the sadness that you felt when you wrote this poem. It was very touching and caused a tear to fall from my face. But I know the good Lord is watching over me every day just as he is looking over you. so I just want to thank you for sharing your poem it was thoughtful and truly amazing in its own special way. Stop by some time and critique my work
Go Fish AKA Call Girl Rating: Good
I read this and just laughed. It wasn't preachy, it wasn't uplifting, it was quick, and it was witty. very nice.
For My People :-) Rating: Excellent
Lady L ~ How come I have never seen this before -- I have been here for about an hour, I have missed your work so much! stay you always!