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Sensless Acts of Violence
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ok i wrote this in like 5 minutes, the other night i was angry by what a certain person did to me, so was inspired to write about him.
senseless acts of violence,
Directed to you
often wonder why they cloud the mind
Submissive in demands,
yet who can show,
What violence is.
Exciting gift, delivered by you,
Seems to glimmer in the dark,
yet extinguishes on your breath,
The one single word
That one fears to say
Lost in the dark.
Formal request, sent to you,
once beauty in its day,
Now dull and lifeless,
almost dead.
Feel not shame nor fear,
show us your true beauty.
Show the way to success,
Prove that you can walk that way.
But do not feel when so many have
Died for your cause,
Loving to hate.
Stop now and you will see,
Honest thoughts,
The world, and its violent sincerity.
btw, feedback from anyone would be appreciated! im new to this, and i dont think they sound too good (especially the endings :( ) Thx peeps.
ok i wrote this in like 5 minutes, the other night i was angry by what a certain person did to me, so was inspired to write about him.
senseless acts of violence,
Directed to you
often wonder why they cloud the mind
Submissive in demands,
yet who can show,
What violence is.
Exciting gift, delivered by you,
Seems to glimmer in the dark,
yet extinguishes on your breath,
The one single word
That one fears to say
Lost in the dark.
Formal request, sent to you,
once beauty in its day,
Now dull and lifeless,
almost dead.
Feel not shame nor fear,
show us your true beauty.
Show the way to success,
Prove that you can walk that way.
But do not feel when so many have
Died for your cause,
Loving to hate.
Stop now and you will see,
Honest thoughts,
The world, and its violent sincerity.
btw, feedback from anyone would be appreciated! im new to this, and i dont think they sound too good (especially the endings :( ) Thx peeps.
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Sensless Acts of Violence
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