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Tommy and Maddie


Mommy
Oh Mommy
Please let me play with Tommy
He promised he'd call me
I made myself into a doll
But i didn't expect to fall
No, not at all
But it was his call
And he didn't go for it
No, not at all.

Oh Mommy
Why'd you ever let me play with Tommy
He hurt me Mommy
And never did call me
He's let me be
Gee
Did you see this coming Mommy
Did you see how Tommy
Could Be
That he'd hurt me
Unbelievably.

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This is kinda the Guys point of view...I really don't think i did too well on this but i thought it would be neat to do it like this...

Daddy
Oh Daddy
Her name was Maddie
And i treated her so badly
It all ended so sadly.

Oh Daddy
I acted so badly
I'd call he gladly
If i knew she wouldn't be mad by me.

Daddy
Oh Daddy
I want to be with Maddie
But it ended so sadly
And i'd die for her gladly
Daddy







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