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Commitment And Love


Just to hear the words "I Love You"
Mean the everlasting world to me but
I want to live my everlasting world
With you, the one that I do love.

I want to hold your hand without
Letting go, without losing you.
I want to hold you in my arms,
So loving and caring.

I want to look into your eyes
And see the pretty stars go
Off as we kiss with such passion.
I want to feel the soul rushing desire.

But I can't do all this without
Your commitment and love.
Prove to me you love me,
Prove to me you care.

I want to spend eternity with you
I want us to become as one but I
Need you to work with me as we
Show our commitment and love.

By:Ashley Chavis
age:19
11-15-05

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