Poetry that thinks out loud
Open your eyes (edited version)
There's a tunnel hands all around.
Blurry vision muffled sound.
As you approach those beautiful gates.
You would be anxious as you wait.
Heaven that beautiful garden of paradise.
All the people you ever loved and idolize.
As you walk in and feel the emotion.
Stunned by the overwhelming location.
Around you there are breathtaking views.
Many opportunities what will you choose.
Have you tried your life to earn this worth.
Let me take you to the day of your birth.
And how you made your entrance to this earth.
There's a tunnel hands all around.
Blurry vision muffled sound.
You enter earth a place full of paradise.
People around who you'll love and idolize.
Taken home to an overwhelming location.
Every day you will gain a new emotion.
There are so many wonderful views.
Many opportunities you can choose.
What again was it you wanted to gain.
Does it now seem strangely the same.
Heaven if it exists may not be earth.
Just don't view it for less than it's worth.
Blurry vision muffled sound.
As you approach those beautiful gates.
You would be anxious as you wait.
Heaven that beautiful garden of paradise.
All the people you ever loved and idolize.
As you walk in and feel the emotion.
Stunned by the overwhelming location.
Around you there are breathtaking views.
Many opportunities what will you choose.
Have you tried your life to earn this worth.
Let me take you to the day of your birth.
And how you made your entrance to this earth.
There's a tunnel hands all around.
Blurry vision muffled sound.
You enter earth a place full of paradise.
People around who you'll love and idolize.
Taken home to an overwhelming location.
Every day you will gain a new emotion.
There are so many wonderful views.
Many opportunities you can choose.
What again was it you wanted to gain.
Does it now seem strangely the same.
Heaven if it exists may not be earth.
Just don't view it for less than it's worth.
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Open your eyes (edited version)
Open your eyes (edited version)
