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 NOBODY KNOWS(Candleholder Of Light)

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~Nobody Knows~
(Candleholder of Light)




Pain and misery
Death awaiting
Fear, violence
Now war creating

Nobody knows now
When why and how
All this is sad
So far it looks bad

It seems whole world mad
Everybody is blue
There are not winners
Pain and misery
Everything lost

Everything lost
Death awaiting
So far this looks bad
More hatred and violence
This latest war just creating
Pain and misery,death awaiting



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2009



~"The Candleholder Of Light" is a new poetry
form, created by Dorian Petersen Potter,
on September 22,2009.

It consists of 2 Quatrains, 1 Quintet, and 1 Sestet stanzas.
All 4 stanzas are separated in between.

Lines:19

Centered to show its shape

Syllable count: It varies as stated below for this format.

Any subject desired.


Stanza 1, First Quatrain:

Line 1- A(refrain) 5 syllables
Line 2- B(refrain) 4 syllables
Line 3- c ... ........4 syllables
Line 4- b.............5 syllables

Stanza 2, Second Quatrain:

d............5 syllables
d............4 syllables
e............4 syllables
e............5 syllables

Stanza 3, Quintet

e.............5 syllables
f..............6 syllables
g.............5 syllables
A(refrain)..5 syllables
C(refrain)..4 syllables


Stanza 4, Sestet

C(refrain)...4 syllables
B(refrain)...4 syllables
e..............5 syllables
j.............. 7 syllables
b...............8 syllables
A/B (refrains) repeat line 1 and line 2
of first quatrain here, and separate both
lines using a comma,or semicolon, and
that finishes this format.
When done right, this poem shows
the shape of a candleholder.







        
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