Mikissa's world
Hello you, (yes, you)
I would truly appreciate your feedback on a poem I'm dabbling with. (Saffron Songbird) I've been playing with alliteration in this poem and need somebody's truest fresh eyes (and honest opionion) as I do not have a clear cut understanding on good technique. Is this too much?? Pls leave a feedback if you have a moment to critique. I will weigh all suggestions heavily.
T.Y.
Greatest appreciation for your time,
Mikissa
I would truly appreciate your feedback on a poem I'm dabbling with. (Saffron Songbird) I've been playing with alliteration in this poem and need somebody's truest fresh eyes (and honest opionion) as I do not have a clear cut understanding on good technique. Is this too much?? Pls leave a feedback if you have a moment to critique. I will weigh all suggestions heavily.
T.Y.
Greatest appreciation for your time,
Mikissa
