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When things are OFF KEEL
i can't understand, how with some, others --TO--THEM--it's,--JUST-NO-BIG-DEAL
With ME, when I feel, like things--ARE--OFF--KEEL
i feel,greatly--UNCOMFORTABLE--as--walking, in shoes,without-support of a HEEL
When things are completely and defeatingly, way way way--OFF-- track--and--KEEL
it just baffles me, as some folks, they just think that, it's--NO--BIG--DEAL
When,things are way, OFF, TRACK--and--KEEL
its a HUGE GREAT DEAL, of what a--HEART--FEELS
A person, that cares not how another feels,OFF, KEEL
their love, care, and concern--is--not--HEARTFUL--or--REAL
When things are OFF-KEEL, and NOT-MENDED, rightly
a person feels cloudy mostly and cared about very very very--slightly
When things with, communications with others, most especially --FAMILY--members---LOVED--ONES--are-----way-WAY-way-----OFF-----centered----and-----KEEL
Dont DEBATE ---dont WAIT---, don't HESITATE--, --MEND--YOUR--FENCES--because when you wait,--IT-- causes hurt, and pains the sames--wake UP--because--if--things--are--a--MIDST--and--ADFIFT----------fix-it---------QUICK---------because--being----OFF-KEEL-----is--wrong--and--a--leaking--SEAL--and--a--BIG-bad-sad--DEAL--that-needs--to--BE--MENDED--and--HEALED--WITH--courage-to-FORGIVE--with--PURE-HEARTFUL--LOVE-LOVE-LOVE--beautifully--REAL
By John d JUNGERS
12th of DECEMBER 2017
i can't understand, how with some, others --TO--THEM--it's,--JUST-NO-BIG-DEAL
With ME, when I feel, like things--ARE--OFF--KEEL
i feel,greatly--UNCOMFORTABLE--as--walking, in shoes,without-support of a HEEL
When things are completely and defeatingly, way way way--OFF-- track--and--KEEL
it just baffles me, as some folks, they just think that, it's--NO--BIG--DEAL
When,things are way, OFF, TRACK--and--KEEL
its a HUGE GREAT DEAL, of what a--HEART--FEELS
A person, that cares not how another feels,OFF, KEEL
their love, care, and concern--is--not--HEARTFUL--or--REAL
When things are OFF-KEEL, and NOT-MENDED, rightly
a person feels cloudy mostly and cared about very very very--slightly
When things with, communications with others, most especially --FAMILY--members---LOVED--ONES--are-----way-WAY-way-----OFF-----centered----and-----KEEL
Dont DEBATE ---dont WAIT---, don't HESITATE--, --MEND--YOUR--FENCES--because when you wait,--IT-- causes hurt, and pains the sames--wake UP--because--if--things--are--a--MIDST--and--ADFIFT----------fix-it---------QUICK---------because--being----OFF-KEEL-----is--wrong--and--a--leaking--SEAL--and--a--BIG-bad-sad--DEAL--that-needs--to--BE--MENDED--and--HEALED--WITH--courage-to-FORGIVE--with--PURE-HEARTFUL--LOVE-LOVE-LOVE--beautifully--REAL
By John d JUNGERS
12th of DECEMBER 2017
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When things are OFF keel
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