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Reading my FeedBACK
was my nine year old Grand Daughter,
And she said GRAMPS, what's That
So she always sees me writin writin and writin
and to all these folks it's just same old same old and not excitin
So as my nine year old side kick, and constant companion,--and-Loyal--bestest--Friend--- GRANDEST -grand--Daughter, ya KNOW
she says GRAMPS, can I read your feedBACKS, --slow
So she has been reading all, page to page to page and finally did SAY
GRAMPS, seems like so many nice things people said about you in every WAY
And the SMILE on her FACE--and--HEART
made me SMILE a lot even deeper, as I saw her agreement,of every feedback,kind thoughtful, Loving words of every Part
This little girl she just wanted to keep on a keeping on a readin and readin,
And she said, she wanted to read them, every one here IN
So, I told her later and rest now and later tommorrow read another feedback verse
so she is playin her new game on her Nintendo SWITH, and
no school tomorrow, so we are in no hurries to sleep, and will see who gets Worn out first
So just hangin now past PM of ten
with my Grandest grands daughter, me writin and writin
and her playin Nintendo switch so we will see who wants to sleep first and quit, and I don't really know just when
By John d JUNGERS
25th of MARCH 2018
was my nine year old Grand Daughter,
And she said GRAMPS, what's That
So she always sees me writin writin and writin
and to all these folks it's just same old same old and not excitin
So as my nine year old side kick, and constant companion,--and-Loyal--bestest--Friend--- GRANDEST -grand--Daughter, ya KNOW
she says GRAMPS, can I read your feedBACKS, --slow
So she has been reading all, page to page to page and finally did SAY
GRAMPS, seems like so many nice things people said about you in every WAY
And the SMILE on her FACE--and--HEART
made me SMILE a lot even deeper, as I saw her agreement,of every feedback,kind thoughtful, Loving words of every Part
This little girl she just wanted to keep on a keeping on a readin and readin,
And she said, she wanted to read them, every one here IN
So, I told her later and rest now and later tommorrow read another feedback verse
so she is playin her new game on her Nintendo SWITH, and
no school tomorrow, so we are in no hurries to sleep, and will see who gets Worn out first
So just hangin now past PM of ten
with my Grandest grands daughter, me writin and writin
and her playin Nintendo switch so we will see who wants to sleep first and quit, and I don't really know just when
By John d JUNGERS
25th of MARCH 2018
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