Absent Minded
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Holier times Feedback provided by: blackafroangelwe don't live in holier times! we live in hell, anywhos, this dragged on, alot, alot of preachin you've done hear, it's was interesting to say teh least, nice wya to expres thine opinions...
2007-09-04 23:16:37 IP: 172\.167\.23\.234 Glistening Feedback provided by: given2dahateYou know they say that God exist's in the light Inaccessible.*just a thought. Great write here by the way. The title struck my attention *given2dahate*
2007-09-04 09:38:42 IP: 207\.126\.221\.56 skipper House of me Feedback provided by: skippergreat poem
2007-09-02 11:47:55 IP: 4\.234\.27\.177 Holier times Feedback provided by: mzI love this! Good job!!! very good write. Mz. www.poetrypoem.com/mz
2007-09-02 11:25:00 IP: 4\.234\.27\.177 MY grace Feedback provided by: mzGood write... very much appreciated..mz www.poetrypoem.com/mz
2007-09-01 23:22:06 IP: thedurzetbaird My part in the plan Rating: ExcellentHi sorry if i offended you sir,obviously you didnt like my critique,i was trying to be constructive n not critical,your obviuously very talented n yes i could highlight every page n im not blind old or stupid,wouldnt be a crime if i was as were all fools in Christ
2007-09-01 11:30:35 IP: thedurzetbaird The real antichrist Rating: Excellentreally wish i could read your lines through the backgrounds.the titles sound so interesting
poetrypoem.com/19971 I know its me, be my decoy Rating: ExcellentEXCELLENT WRITE! YOUR IMAGERY IS THE ROOF ON YOUR POEM. CONTENT CLEAR. THROUGHOUT READING OF YOUR POEMS/PROSE, I FIND ALL TO BE EXCELLENT WORK. PLEASE STOP BY AND READ MY WORK AND GIVE ME YOUR FEEDBACK AS WELL. THANKS LEE
2007-08-29 18:58:25 IP: 70\.249\.183\.11 Glistening Feedback provided by: nana5wow beautifully expressed, and I'm impressed loved this one my friend, more food for thought, and I like that I've been gone again but am back hope your doing ok see you again soon nana5
2007-08-28 12:25:33 IP: 124\.177\.174\.90 You are a toy and im from a world where everyone has their own world Feedback provided by: mylifeandothercrazyeventsit's all very confusing, hey
2007-08-26 05:21:47 IP: 66\.192\.6\.131 Another Nightmare induced from my medication Rating: scagbdkn wnzmxqr cweijvbq ocxftw bpmnjyqh frcujdn mrncwupe
2007-08-25 22:03:25 IP: 68\.255\.103\.150 tangents to explore (or for me to write later) Feedback provided by: thegreatdivide18Very interesting write, very original.
2007-08-25 02:29:15 IP: 74\.237\.0\.160 Glistening Rating: Excellentvery descriptive... almost inspirational? very cool. - val
2007-08-23 12:42:14 IP: 60\.190\.249\.66 mxhnaopz@mail.com Satanic Mansion Traps Rating: fwnm hdms dsfqba phmrn adqmshc ordclaxth xpfuh
2007-08-21 01:45:00 Hell of a dream Feedback provided by: forsakendreams
wow what an interesting dark write. i liked it. Lee-Lis
2007-08-19 11:45:41 lovers denials Feedback provided by: madhatter1
BEAUTIFUL!!!!
2007-08-17 04:13:52 Problematic and life lesson dishout Feedback provided by: poet222
hows my buddy doing god give you peace of mind and bless you this day
Insufficient funds Feedback provided by: buriedtreasuresExcellent !!! Well written, structured and versed ! You have a lot of talent ! AL (buried treasures)
2007-08-14 14:34:00 IP: 172\.213\.16\.71 The first person of he said she said Feedback provided by: starchildbrilliant poem
2007-08-10 20:46:41 IP: 213\.165\.224\.109 Every song Rating: ExcellentI thought over the time you will improve in writing poems. You are still writing poems with logical flaws. To say "every song ever sang is from me somehow" if false. Songs before you were born cannot be by you. Then you continue on similar line with false logic. Logical flow is important. Without that poem loses its credibility. I want to help you but you should realise that you need help. If you think your poems are perfect then will take everything back. Take care Kris ~ dreamweaver PS your background stops your poems being visible.
2007-08-09 18:35:35 www.poetrypoem.com/sisimelody He is Feedback provided by: sisimelody
very touching, lovely poem
2007-08-07 18:53:51 Ecards Rating: Excellent
wow deep and loving and comparing that love to the legendary Phoenix is awesome what a passionate match that would be, love on my friend, love on nana5
2007-08-07 18:48:01 Every song Rating: Excellent
wow this was awesome my friend communicating through song all the highes and lows, that rush of different tones to set the mood for any occasion, loved it, keep writing nana5
2007-08-06 02:53:48 Murder Capital of The Country Feedback provided by: tammy
Very very interesting.Keep writing
2007-08-02 15:22:23 What I know about Therapy Feedback provided by: blackafroangel
i admit it, i skipped a little, but this sounds like a whole lotta preachin, my advice, make it rhyme, it would be more that just preachin, keep writing...
2007-08-01 14:34:14 Symbol poem for val Rating: Excellent
XD i love it! haha. i really don't know how to figure out what it's saying, but thanks for the gesture anyway. haha. btw, sorry i havent been around much at all, as usual it seems now. i'm just an ass. sorry. lol. - val
2007-07-31 19:09:17 The first person of he said she said Rating: Excellent
wow you write so deep my friend, have you ever thought of writing a play, I think you'd be great at it see you again soon deb/nana5
Symbol poem for val Rating: Excellent
alrighty then it looks good haven't a clue what its supposed to mean, but then again maybe I'm not supposed to know lol deb/nana5
2007-07-31 19:02:19 my entrepreneur dream Rating: Excellent
wow what a place that would be, and I bet you could pull it off my friend see you again soon my friend, keep on writing deb/nana5
2007-07-31 16:03:49 Todays secret Fairytale Feedback provided by: dryad1
An interesting story. I liked the idea of testing their teamwork but it was just the tv dystopian thing again. Is this ironic? I found the tv thing sad in the story
2007-07-31 16:01:27 The guy on satellite and the center of everything Feedback provided by: dryad1
This is brilliantly creative (if dystopian) and has good points to offer. If you edit it a bit for clarity (typos etc) making your aim being understood this will go from a good idea to a great poem
2007-07-30 02:08:19 If i'm your job just tell me Feedback
provided by: poetrybuchan
well expressed.
2007-07-27 09:50:07 He is Feedback provided by: smith
A nice romantic poem! Barbara, Poetrypoem.com/smith
2007-07-25 11:22:53 www.poetrypoem.com/destinyofdreams He is Feedback provided by: destinyofdreams
Very beautiful words. Very romanctic.
2007-07-24 17:46:32 IP: 201\.17\.159\.22 mbtao@mail.com my entrepreneur dream Rating: woetf fnglwsou uiemvqts knqet ecrlt eqfmo zeri
2007-07-22 10:32:57 Marilyn Manson Feedback provided by: orchiolum
I would concentrate heavily on spelling.
2007-07-20 12:30:22 IP: 24\.138\.23\.221 Being taught how to hate but never learning(for my fiance Blair) Rating: Excellent
Oh Troy!!! I'm sooo sorry that all this is happening to you.I dont know what to say other then I'm sorry and if you need someone to talk to, I'm always here for you.But PLEASE don't stop living over this-you deserve better and you are the one who can be strong and walk on.This happened so you could learn something and take it with you into your next relashonship.It will be understandable leter-what you are learning now.Trust me.And I've had my heart trampled on mayny times.It's easier to hate the person who hurt you-but in reality, its not better.Be well.Take care of yourself and get the pain out on paper.I have my going away party tonight and then packing, etc.all week-end, and I leave monday morning, so I wont be on much, and no msn when I get there either.I'm planning on travelling everywhere.Drop me a line when you get a chance and remember that a broken heart means that your heart was whole enough to love in the first place.:)smile.-Deanna /deadinside
IT fell apart Feedback provided by: christopherI think this may be one of my favorite poems the subject, the word usage, the form of expression, it all is dreadfully grand it seems very personal and "real-life" and not just an organization of some words floating around in your head. Stick to your senses and things like this will proceed
2007-07-17 17:09:19 He is Rating: Good
Isn't that sweet
2007-07-17 12:35:10 my entrepreneur dream Feedback provided by: proseofpassion
I think this is a very good idea and think it would be a success. I know something like this is hard to get going but you never know. Thanks for sharing this. Marvin
2007-07-16 21:30:46 Reality TV Feedback provided by: christopher
YES!!! totally agree with you on this idea. Kill Your God, Kill Your TV
2007-07-15 10:47:23 Stupid Smart King Feedback provided by: orchiolum
Very good read!
2007-07-15 10:46:06 The guy on satellite and the center of everything Feedback provided by: orchiolum
I would check spelling, capitalization, and flow. Great conecpt and imagery here, and I think it would benefit from a little more focus.
2007-07-14 16:27:07 Marilyn Manson Rating: ExcellentLove it.I have a lot of respect for marylin manson too-so I really enjoyed reading this.-Deanna dead-inside prall
2007-07-14 03:41:53 angelofsins Marilyn Manson Rating: Excellent
Excellent poem, you seem to have your eyes wide open, i admire the truth which has gone into this poem, although I'm sure allot wont agree, well done.......
2007-07-13 12:51:36 Human nature Rating: Excellent
Interesting enjoyable read on Human Nature... You have touched on all the points that many Philosopher's have grappled with over the ages. Thank you for your comments on; Oxford Swans, Blackbeards Pirates & Maypoles Dance, much appreciated Troy. Best wishes Hud
2007-07-13 08:22:33 Broken Feedback provided by: smith
A great confession from the soul...nice write! Barbara, Poetrypoem.com/smith
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